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Im lost in your eyes every time I see
And every time I'm lost,
there is nowhere to go back and think
Think about all the things that we lost
All the things that we dreamed
I wish I had someone to hear me scream.

I was locked by your sight
like a bird in a cage
Chained to a memory
Echoes of the past,
From what was never there,
trying to forget.
Too vulnerable to resist.
Too scared to break free.
I smile through the pain,
like a doll on a string.

And I whisper to the walls that don't whisper back.
Dancing with shadows that
fade into black.
Living in the illusion that I have a chance,
but deep down I know I never had.

I trace all the moments
we never made real.
Building a castle
from the way I feel.
But it is crashing down everytime
I see your face.
Im stuck in a loop that I will never end.