כתבתי קטע כתיבה, דעתכם בנושא (באנגלית)

I look into your eyes but I see they're empty, I'm still in your mind but you think I'm crazy, our pictures on the wall are now just memories, I gave you my soul even though it's full of lies.
My room is dark at night because you're not here to light it up, for you I will fight but you just give up, I will not reach to heaven because I tore my wings off for you, all the love given is still important to you