מצאתי שיר שכתבתי בכיתה ח' מה דעתכם עליו?

*מן הסתם יש בעיות דקדוק כי זה לפני שלוש שנים
אשמח לדעתכם
My all life is a big mess
I'm trying to fix it but I can't,
Everyone that I know have a mask, everyone lying to me,
And their times that I'm lying to myself,

What can I do?
I feel lost and like they're a wall that trying to stop me,
what can I do I lost myself

Now I'm over all that,
Now I'm strong no one can stop me,
No one can drop me,
No one can hurt me anymore,
And suddenly all the people that was close to me disappeared,
How can I trust someone?

What can I do?
I feel lost and like there a wall that trying to stop me,
What can I do I lost myself somebody help