איך הפסקה הזו לדעתכם? יש משהו לתקן? אנשים שטובים באנגלית כנסו

Im my opinion teaching education is very important and necessary for student health
Most students sit in front of their screens during the whole day and after school and dont necessarily do any physical activity which can harm their health and also mentally, additionally in some schools physical activity is a mandatory condition for receiving matriculation