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Part 1: He took me to the backyard and showed me 4 kids hang on the tree with a rope. He told me to pull the rope down they screamed and cried but the boogie man smiled!

Chors: The boogie man he's not your friend! The boogie man will kill again!

Part 2: Later he took me a pool where a femily were in sleep he tied them to the chairs that were in the corner and pused them inside the pool! They screamed and cried but the boogie man smiled!

Chors: The boogie man he's not your friend! The boogie man will kill again!