אנשים שיודעים מאוד טוב אנגלית ויכולים לבדוק לי משהו שכתבתי שיכנסו

.when I was 13 I went to the mall with my friend
After we finished spending at the mall we left the mall and at the entrance we saw a very thin and very old man asking for money from people. He was very thin and it hurt me to see him in this condition so I went back to the mall and bought him a large portion of food and a bottle of water. I brought him the food and water and he said thank you and started eating. It made me feel good about myself and what I did. This is definitely the most exciting thing that has ever happened to me