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What is this love and war?
She know that I love her, got her f**king me raw
She know I ain't with it, never did it before
She got me all in my feelings, now she got you all in yours
It's like that
She ain't never leavin' or she comin' right back
I know that she need it cuz I'm gonna bite back
And she don't want nobody else hitting it like that