מישהוא שטוב באנגלית ויכול לתקן לי טעויות אם יש?

The main character in the story is August Auggie Pullman, a 10-years-old boy with a rare facial deformity and a cleft lip.
he was educated in home school by his mother Until the age of ten because he had to undergo twenty-seven operations and spent a lot of time in hospitals.
When he was supposed to be in fifth grade his parents had come to decide that he should be at a local private school, August passes a lot of pleasant and unpleasant experiences, children harassed him but eventually everyone understood not to judge him on the basis of how he looked at the end of August thanking his mother who forced him to go to school.,