טקסט קצר באנגלית, אשמח שתקראו ותתקנו אותי

היה הרבה לשנות לדעתי אז ניסחתי את זה מחדש ככה שזה יותר "יפה לעין" כזה ונוח לקרוא. היו לך כמה שגיאות כתיב וגרמר אז תיקנתי גם את זה

i disagree, i think that every student should learn for his own future. highschools prepare teenagers for a carrer and helps them to develop. humanity is developing by learning, and those who do not want to learn need to realize that they'll have a hard time getting along in the future and its only their responsiblity to care about it.

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i disagree, in my opinion compulsory education law is not useless.
every student should go to school for the sake of his own future, highschools expose teenagers for many possible future careers and help them develop.
our world is developing by learning, and whoever doesn't want to go to school needs to realize it will affect badly his future and the fault would fall only on him.

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teenagers who don't want to learn need to realize that they are screwing up there future, and it's only theres responsibility