קטע שכתבתי ...דעתכם פליזי:

Im thinking about him abit too much
Im thinking about him, you know its rough
It might be mutual,oh wait its probably not
So...
I should just let him, me ,it go
Be free like a dop , or perhaps a frog
Jump as far as I can
Do whatever I crave
There in the hights never back to the ground
But No...
Gravitation had beaten me
Back on earth, this ground I hate.
Im thinking about him again.


שאלה , מה דעתכם?
והאם לדעתכם הקטע יהיה יותר מעניין ומפתיע בלי הפתיחה של im thinking about him
אלא אתחיל מהמילים I should just...