אשמח לשמוע מהי דעתכם על שיר שכתבתי (הפסיקים מופיעים בצד השני של המשפט כתוצאה מהעתק הדבק מ הMacBook שלי לכאן).

You have the time to complain,
Well I dont have the time to maintain,
The beauty in us is a complex desire we both love to share,
I dont have the time, and I dont have the courage,
To fight it to death, its not that simple, and you already know it

Weather dry inside your room ,
And all you wish that everything would be wet ,
Searching for gold, could turn into a whole life adventure, who is pretty tough, and I dont want it to break the bond

Forgive me, I had been a disaster,
And all I can do, is to sorry for days
Forgive me, I had been a disaster, but you should remember that you are my heart and my soul.