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Elisa is a clever and inquisitive girl, her dreams take her every time to distant lands and strange and upside-down worlds. In one of her dreams, Elisa sees a white rabbit running all the time complaining that he is late. The curious Alyssa follows him, he slips into a cave, Elisa peeks, bends down ... and falls down a long and strange fall until she lands in the heart of the earth. She notices the door to Wonderland, but it is too big to pass, and to her delight she discovers a miraculous potion that shrinks it to the right size, and after she changes her size several times - she bursts into tears and tears become a river, The shores of Wonderland.
In Wonderland, Alyssa meets a strange cat, who every time he answers her questions he only confuses her more. Suddenly the cat begins to disappear until all that is left of it is a smile ...
She walks on, and suddenly meets two identical and disturbing creatures that confuse her even more, with opposite directions, with changing identities and conflicting ideas and irrationality.
Then Elise finds herself at a strange tea party with the mad hatter, for whom time has stopped, and it is always tea time. Here, too, the A-Gion celebrates, from the hat, Elisa celebrates a crazy birthday party.
Elissa's next encounter is with the larva, and here too Elisa reveals that things are not what they seem, and the larva transforms into a cocoon and then a butterfly.
Towards the end of the story Elissa meets with the cruel queen of hearts, who is commanded to paint all the flowers in red, and enjoys decapitating the head of anyone who mutters her mouth. Elissa is invited to play croquet against the queen, and when the queen decides to cut her head because she dared to win the game - you miraculously escaped Elisa because she just - wakes up from the wonderful dream ...