חוות דעת על סוג של שיר שכתבתי (באנגלית)

When March Tears Us Apart



It was a month after you asked me out
When you asked me that I had no doubt
Its not the same now, Im still asking myself how.
Youll never knew what I felt for you, and still does,
Because

Its not easy,
especially when were not busy
Your still in my heart, and its a big part
I stopped my art just thinking where to start
But I cant, youre not going out of my head,
Im in my bed listening to led

Where all this time go?
When did the yes became a no?
We were two enthusiastic kids
We planned the next years

You asked me politely, not like others
Youre a different kind,
thats why youll always be on my mind
Something in you felt so right,
when we talked from the morning until the middle of the night.

And march came, and it wasnt the same
Something changed, in you,
But I still want to.
Why are you punishing yourself?
Is it because of the girl near the shelf?

I still have hope,
Sometimes I want to stop.
But I cant, its not letting me go,
Even if it was a month ago.


(יש לי לעשות תיקוני שפה קטנים אבל לא מצאתי חרוז אחר אז השארתי ככה)