כתבתי שיר על body dysmorphia , אם יש לכם הערות אני שמח, דברים לשפר?

I don't know how I look like
Sometimes i look into the mirror and cry while i watch my body deformed
My eyes blink and try to stay focus
I pinch my skin
Feel all of my flesh and fluids foing upward
I sit on the floor
Imagine
Myself
Im not real
im stuck in this body
Its keep on changing
But always stay the same
I can't run away from this body
Cant escape this feeling