מה דעתכם על השיר שכתבתי, תגיבו בכנות אני לא נעלב

I woke up lost in a stormy sky,
Yesterday was calm, now I dont know why.
Thought I had the path, thought I knew the way,
But the ground gave out and I slipped away.


Every turn is pulling me apart,
But I still feel a fire in my heart.

Its a rollercoaster, up and down we go,
Riding through the highs and every low.
I hold on tight, I wont let go,
Even when Im falling slow.
I break, I bend, Im not the same,
But Im still standing in the rain.

Some days shine and some just fade,
I smile through the mess I never made.
The road is rough, but I still move,
Trying to find a better groove.

Even when the light is hard to see,
I believe theres still a spark in me.

Its a rollercoaster, up and down we go,
Riding through the highs and every low.
I hold on tight, I wont let go,
Even when Im falling slow.
I break, I bend, Im not the same,
But Im still standing in the rain.

Twist me, shake me, I wont fall,
Ive been through fire, Ive faced it all.
If this is life, then let it run,
Ill chase the dark to find the sun.

Its a rollercoaster, wild and real,
But I wont give up the way I feel.
I hold on tight, through all the pain,
Still dancing in the pouring rain.
I break, I bend, I rise again
I'm stronger now than Ive ever been.