אשמח לחוות דעת על מה שכתבתי (באנגלית)

Its wednsday night
by the time that you realy understand that you cant fall asleep for almost 3 weeks
I mean you are tierd and want to sleep despretly but you technicly cant
Not even with music
Not any more
Wednsday its by the time that you realize that you are cursed
That lifes hates you
That the world hates you
That god hates you
And you dont realy have a reason to stay
You do some nasty things to your self
That no one will ever know
But even those things are not enough anymore
And you actuly know that you are not belong here
You are like a shadow between lions
But you are actuly feel like a lonely shadow wolf that dont fit anywhere
And you cant wait to the time when youll die
You cant stop think of how to do it
But you hope just one thing
That your last brethe will be a sigh of relif