כתבתי שיר קטן באנגלית אשמח לחוות דעת

I saw myself through the darkness
I did not know where to go
But I kept going
Until I got out of the way
I was told to cross

I continue to feel these feelings
Come and go like waves
Until the low comes
And takes everything back

Everything becomes too perfect
And the sun shone brightly
I wanted to leave, but I could not
Because it overcame me

I reset myself
And I took a deep breath
The smell of the sea
And I dived deep
To see in depth
The treasure
Waiting for me