5 יחל באנגלית סיימתי כתיבה, יש כאן כאלו שתותחים באנגלית ? ויכולים לבדוק לי ולשנות אם תוכלו, אני אשמח ותודה לעונים(:

ninis of the transportation are suggested to raise the age for the drivers license to the age nineteen.
first, i don't agree with this claim because license at young age its a good thing.
in fact, there is no reason to be delayed until the age ninte. in my opinion as long the new drivers start to drive at an earlier stage they are going more experience behind the wheel
secondly,in the age ninten the young drives are independence, they need to fund money for themselves like, studies and drives and bus its not always the comfortable
choice. for the indepence they need car to make it easier for themselves in the day.
nevertheless, there is some people that dont take care of of themselves, and affected by social pressure, drink alcohol and damage the environment.
therefor, is it very important to keep the traffic rules, and don't drive with inexperienced
people.
in collision, i think that license its important for our accessibility in the daily life.

(אני צריכה 140 מילים אני לא בטוחה אם יש מספיק אשמח אם תאמרו לי)