מה דעתכם על הקטע כתיבה? (באנגלית)

She was beautiful
But nobody knew how to act with such pretty shell.
All they did was revealing her hidden pearls, and throwing them on the streets for everybody to see, not keeping the pearls private anymore, and leaving her shell broken next to it, like it was nothing.
Shes not the same anymore.
And her shell will never be the same too