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my favourite place in the city is my home. what I like about my home , is that Im with the people I love , my family. I like to help my parents, be with my little brother, play with him, and see him grow up. also, I like to be in My room, and watch tv-shows or Movies, put on Make-up, and sleep a lot. My home is the place that Makes Me feel most comfortable, I make myself food sometimes, and I enjoy from it.