המשפט הזה תקין? I think is it better because after pain we gets strong and smart than we was

i think it is better because after getting hurt we become stronger and smarter than we
were before

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i think it is better because after we got hurt we become to stronger and smarter than we were
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became to stronger זה לא תקני

תודה על התיקון שיניתי^

i think it's better because once we get hurt we become stronger and smarter