מישהו יכול לתקן אותי איפה שטעיתי(באנגלית) לתקן בפסקים נקודות וזמנים נכונים

My grandmother brought me a necklace when I was 8 The necklace is important to me because it's the only thing she gave me, the necklace is gold plated The necklace is different from my other objects because I was tied to the necklace and I wear the necklace almost all the time. My grandmother is very important to me and I feel close to her because of the necklace, I also feel that the necklace helps me when I wear it