מי שמכיר את השיר heather

אהמ כתבתי גרסה משלי יש חלקים שהם לא כל כך לפי השיר/מוזיקה אבל זה נראה לי בסדר אם תוכלו לתת ביקורת זה יהיה מדהים 3:
I still remember 13 of November
u in my sweater I gave it to u as a present for your 15 birthday
but little did u know how that i
liked u since ever
but u like her better
her gift is way better
like I care
why would u ever friend me
im not even half as funny
7 years are wasted
But time doesnt matter
when u like her better
I wish I were her
I really like u she said with a smile
bc she knew u liked her back
I like u too as they both got embarrassed
When I have watched from the safest distance
Bc i..
Didnt want them to see me cry
Ive liked u since ever
but u like her better
like I care
why would u ever friend me
im not even half as pretty
7 years are wasted
But time doesnt matter
When u like her better
I wish I were her
I wish I were her
I wish I were her
Why would u ever friend me
Now my heart is broken
They said move on its better
7 years are wasted
Bc u like her better
U know how I hate her