מה אתם אומרים על החיבור שלי?

אני צריכה שתגידו לי אם מבחינת החוקים הוא סביר לילדה בכיתה ז' :
In the corona time my life, my family life and our world life have changed, we can start from this we did not learn and we remained at home so long- that, and other things can be very annoying.
This is not the best period, or reality we expected, that I expected.




In this time I didn't do much, I learning, playing and eating almost all the time- if I don't do that I probably edit something or sleep.
This situation helped me understand- all the time we going outside and not appreciate what we have inside- in the home, in the family.

זה סבבה?