כתבתי את השיר הזה מה אתם חושבים עליו?כדאי להמשיך?(הוא באנגלית יכול להיות שיהיו טעויות)

I can't handle with that shit
So i am running from my past
Don't let me down feet
This race doesn't end, I'm not fast
Why I am still living in a grave?
All the pain comes out in tears
Leading down on my face
Dead inside there is nobody to save
Try to escape but I can't escape the fate
Open my chest, my heart full of darkness
Anxious all the time,I want to be fear less
Suicidal thoughts going through my brain
Haven't Smiled in a while,all I feel is pain