מה אתם חושבים על הגרסא הזו שכתבתי לשיר Bang bang (אנגלית).

I was 5 and he was six
We rode on horses made of sticks
He wore black and I wore white
Hed always win the fight
Bang bang
He shot me down
Bang bang
I hit the ground
Bang bang
That awful sound
Bang bang
My baby shot me down

I was fifteen, he sixteen,
We rode on horses that were real
He wore black and I wore white
He would always win the fight
Bang bang
He shot her down
bang bang
She hit the ground
Bang bang
That awful sound
Bang bang
My baby shot her down

I was old and so did he
We didnt rode we walked under our tree
I wore black and he wore white
He used to always win our fights
Bang bang
I shot him down
Bang bang
He hit the ground
Bang bang
That awful sound
Bang bang
I shot my baby down.