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i'm reading a great book these days, you should definitely read it! i think in english it's called: "i'll give you the sun". it's such a lovely story, i think you would like it.
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i'm reading these days a great book that you should definitely read! i think that in english it called "i'll give you the sun" and it's such a lovely story that i think you would really like.

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