מה דעתכם על השיר שכתבתי? באנגלית.

nights out of town and days indoors
soft smell of wine and ancient ghosts
i should be through it by now
i should be through it by now
they thought they won, i thought i lost
they know how to expect the most
but they know romance is gone
they know romance is gone

i've seen things you had already seen before
nothing new under the sun
years i don't remember anymore
help me see who i've become
said that it's a bad idea
but there's nothing new under the sun
nothing new under the sun
nothing new under the sun
it's alright

the trees are burning and they're yellow
the winter isn't coming anyway
not sleeping with some neo mellow
what if i'm the wrong one in this case
summer breeze will disappear
there's absolutely nothing for us here

nothing new under the sun
there's nothing new under the sun
even if the sky goes down
nothing new under the sun

night out of town and days indoors
i should be through it by now

יש לזה מנגינה בראש שלי, אני יודעת שהמבנה מוזר.