ניסיתי לכתוב שיר, מה אתם חושבים?

זה על איך השרגשתי שהייתה לי תקופה מעצבנת כזו.
טני לא הכי טובה בזב אבל מצאתי את זה עכדיו

i feel alone, like i ran out of luck
like everything inside me is just dark
like everybody kept going and i just fell
its like i am under some evil spell
everything will be fine, thats what i was told
but i hate every chord in this hell of a world
i hate every word in this damn song
i dont understand when i've gone wrong

they tell me to be optimistc, think good
try harder, yes you should
they dont understand me
cant see whats on my mind
i have to to be perfect
i am trying to be kind
i have so much rigrets
i have to many fears
but i am never able to stop the tears
they are filling my ayes, but i keep telling lies
i say i'm okey , but i am screaming inside
i want to be perfect, but i cant hide
i hope one day i will rise, put the past behind