החיבור שכתבתי נראה כאילו ילד בכיתה ח', הקבצה א' באנגלית כתב את זה??

My family is the source of my strength, it fills my up with energy to succeed and to fulfill my dreams. It challenges me to do things I never thought I could. Family is unconditional love, they will always love and believe in me no matter what. I know that I will do everything to make them proud of me, when they happy Im happy too.