מה דעתכם על מה שכתבתי? אשמח לביקורת וחוות דעת :) (באנגלית)

I always wanted inner peace,
but how can you find peace in a world full of chaos?
where chaos finds you everywhere you go
it knocks at your door, it crawls on your walls, it shows up in your room every time something isn't exactly perfect.
So tell me, how can I find the inner peace I've been searching for when everywhere I look, all I see is anger and hatred?
I always wanted inner peace, but the more I looked for it and begged, I realized that maybe I wasn't born for peace
maybe I can't find inner peace because it doesn't exist in me, in my soul. In my bones. All I've ever known is chaos, letting it tear me apart until it became the only place that ever felt familiar.
I always wanted inner peace but I need to stop expecting peace when peace was never even invited or a friend that might come when you need them.
I need to stop waiting for peace and let peace become a part of me before chaos ruins every hope and part of me that ever wished, for inner peace.
And then, maybe, I'll find the inner peace that I've been searching for my whole life.
because I always wanted inner peace.