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Illusion

Nothing feels the same
Those walls, doors, floors and frames
Contain memories that had faded away
Memories that can turn everything grey

This house doesn't feel like home anymore
It feels more like something I used to know
Like an old friend I used to call
But now, he's just a whisper down the hall

It's like looking at your own reflection
And feeling nothing but disconnection
It feels like I'm in another nation
Or maybe it's just my imagination