מישהו יכול להגיד לי איך כתבתי ובמה לשפר?(באנגלית)

There are many important people in my life, but my mom is the most important. My mom is 47 years old, and she has brown hair and brown eyes. My mom is also kind, funny, and caring. In addition, she is very protective and understanding. Besides that, I love spending time with my mom. I love going for walks with her, playing games on Saturdays, and watching movies together. In conclusion, these moments make me realize how lucky I am.