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Woke up again, it feels the same
Heavy heart, cant play this game
People talk, but I dont hear
Smiles fake, I disappear

(Chorus)
I'm tired of the noise, tired of the fight
Losing myself every night
They say, just breathe, itll be okay
But I fade more every day

(Verse 2)
Coffees cold, the mirror's cracked
I miss the fire that I once had
Eyes are open, but I can't see
Who I was, or who Ill be

(Chorus)
I'm tired of the noise, tired of the fight
Losing myself every night
They say, just breathe, itll be okay
But I fade more every day

[Bridge]
Is there a light behind this gray?
Or am I just one breath away?
Not asking for a perfect end
Just a moment I don't pretend

[Outro]
Im tired of the noise
Tired of pretending
Tired of surviving
Without really living