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צריך לכתוב על מסיבה שהייתי בה, בpast simple

I'll never forget the surprise party for my friend, Yael. It was on July 23rd, at Yael's house.
There were a lot of Yael's friends at the party. We played "Pass The Parcel", we ate a tasty pizza together and we watched TV shows. It was very special for me because I planned this party.
It was the best day ever, and I hope I will have a chance to plan another surprise party in the future.