למישהו יש הצעות איך לשפר את הכתיבה הזאת באנגלית?

Some people think that the school day should begin later in the morning, i agree with them for the following reasons

First , Im my opinion I think it is better if the school starts later in the morning because the students will wake up late and it will give them extra energy for the rest of the day .

Second , If the school day will start later in the morning the students will can wake up late and still manage to make themselves something to eat before they go out .

In conclusion, I hope that the school would start in the morning.