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Some people think that the school day should begin later in the morning, i agree with them for the following reasons

First , Im my opinion I think it is better if the school starts later in the morning because the students will wake up late and it will give them extra energy for the rest of the day .

Second , If the school day will start later in the morning the students will can wake up late and still manage to make themselves something to eat before they go out .

In conclusion, I hope that the school would start in the morning.
9 באפריל 2024, 00:19
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some people think that the school day should begin in later hours of the day than usual.
and i agree with them, heres why:

first of all, i think the students will gain
more energy for school because they can sleep enough hours to not get all drowsy while at school.

second of all, the students can have enough time to prepare something for themselves to eat before they go out.

in conclusion, i think that the school should begin at later hours in the day
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