כתבתי שיר באנגלית על התאהבות חד צדדית מה אומרים

קראתי לו My sin

You and I
We were always together
All the way back
since we were eleven
I held your hand
And you held mine
Together forever until the end of time
I held, and I kept on holding
Forever as you said
Ill never leave
Because you are my best friend

And then we grew older
Yes, I am to be blamed
My deepest condolences
I am truly ashamed
I hope no one notices
As I hide my pain
I tried to move on
I really, really did
But loving you is so addictive
Obsession
is it, or, it is?

Its not healthy
Nor is it fair
But loving you is a need such as air
All it takes is a single glare
When I see you my heart declares
It hurts
So hear hear
lets hoorah for new
I cant help it
Im so sorry, I love you

I promise
I'll never expect you to say yes
Ill be here and Ill never confess
This love is nothing but scary
To me and to everyone else
I dont care if Im hurting
Ill stay in silence
Ill keep on a smile
Ill be the pilot
And Ill keep on and hide
So please, stay by my side
Because I prefer to slowly die than lose my life

Its crazy for me to see you like this
I know that deep
Yet it aches
I am so sorry, I will love you forever
And that truth is my sin
My error
That is my crime
My deepest condolences
Ill really love you until the end of time