יש לי מבחן בקרוב באנגלית שצריך לכתוב בו פסקת דעה. ניסיתי לכתוב אחת כזו בעצמי, אשמח שתתנו לי חוות דעת

ותגידו אם יש משהו לשפר או לשים דגש.

הנושא: עבודה בקבוצות או לבד.

Many students come across projects and big assignments in their school years, and every time they get stuck on the same question: "Work individually or in a group". I believe that working in a group could hurt your final product and you might not able be to fully express yourself while working with others. Even though there are some advantages to this like: a lot of ideas, much faster progress, etc.. the disadvantages over come them and in the end you feel much more secure with your own work. To sum up, doing assignments on your own is much safer, better and is recommended.