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hey,
two years ago, i heard about the soharut program in ort givat ram school.
i had to decide if i want to move school or not.
in the end i decided to go to ort for a few reasons:
1. it's an opportunity to meet new friends.
2.because it's an army program has high discipline and it's important for me
3. this program will help me in the future.
today i am study in this program and i'm really happy that i chose this way.
זה נשמע נכון? לגבי הסיבה השנייה אני ממש לא בטוחה

i had to decide if i want to move to a new school or not.
eventually i decided to go for it for a few reasons:
1. it's an opportunity to meet new friends.
2.it's a military program in which will provide me with high discipline and thats a priority for me
3. the program will help me in the future.
today i participate in the program and i'm satisfied with my decision.

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