היי, לכל אלה שטובים באנגלית תגידו לי עם יש טעות פה ועם אתם יכולים לתקן תודה^^

שואל השאלה:
hi dan
how are you? i want to tell you about my life in this country... israel,
in the morning,i go to my school,he is beer sheva the city i live in. its a big city, in my school we learn about the culture of our contry and english, math, sciences and more. after school im going home or to one of my friends home.usually im walks home alone or with friends.usually when my friends coming over, we see some good movie, talk or in my computer.

it's located in be'er sheva

צריך לכתוב i went to school

שואל השאלה:
תודה ^^

after school i go home or to one of my friends home.usually i walk home alone or with friends

usually הוא present simple

i walk**

hi dan
how are you? i'd like to tell you about my life in israel.
in the morning, i go to school, which is in be'er sheva, where i live. it's a big city. in school we learn about the culture of our country and subjects like english, math, science and more. after school i whether go home or to my friend's. i walk home alone or with friends.usually when my friends come over, we like to watch good movies, talk or play on the computer

עשיתי מה שיכולתי בלי להרוס את זה
בהצלחה

וגם כותבים על בי"ס it is in beer sheva.
במקום he, צריך להיות it (:

כותבים country וגם i'm חוץ מזה אין לי כוח פיוו אני מתעייפת רק מלראות את האורך של זה o: