מישהו יכול לבדוק לי בבקשה את הכתיבה שלי באנגלית פה ?

- [ ] The new ending in my opinion for Jimmy Valentine's story is - after Jimmy talked to the detective he went to Annabelle to apologize for hiding his past from her. It was a little difficult for Annabelle to understand this, but still she saw what he did to save the girl from the vault. Annabelle did not hesitate and quickly told him that the past had already passed and to focus on the future. A few months later, Jimmy proposed marriage to Anabel. and since then they have already married and are living a happy life. Today Jimmy gives workshops to people in prison about his story and the change he went through