מישהו או מישהי שחזקים באנגלית, בעיקר בדקדוק ויכולים לבדוק את הפסקה של היתרונות והחסרונות ללמידה מרחוק, שציפרתי כאן למטה?

During the corona pandemic, all educational institutions have moved to distance learning.
There are several advantages of online education: first, Online education allows people to learn in their own pace, which helps them absorb more information. Secondly, there is no need to get up early in the morning. In addition, online education significantly reduces costs such as fuel, public transportation, etc. Online learning also has some disadvantages: first of all, online education requires high self-discipline and the ability to manage time properly. Furthermore, online education relies on external factors such as computer and internet, which may have malfunctions that interfere with the normal course of studies. Not to mention, Lack of interaction- social interaction is an integral part of the learning experience.