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1) My dietitian told me how proud she was of me, and how much I had changed for the better:) and I went to school even though it was Friday and stayed until 15. Then I went to my favorite place, Jerusalem)


2) My dietitian told me how proud she was of me, and how much I had changed for the better:) and I went to school even though it was Friday and stayed until 15. Then I went to my favorite place, Jerusalem
19 בפברואר 2022, 13:21
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שואל השאלה:
2 תקין?? או שיש טעויות??
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שואל השאלה:
אם אני מוסיפה את המשפט " about my whole day yesterday." זה ישאר תיקני??

כאילו: " my dietitian told me how proud she was of me, and how much i had changed for the better:) and i went to school even though it was friday and stayed until 15. then i went to my favorite place, jerusalem. *about my whole day yesterday"
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