עזרה דחופה באנגלית צריכה שתתקנו את מה שכתבתי זה לעבודה באנגלית אני מתחננת

שואל השאלה:
my dream is to be a doctor , i want to save a life and learn so i can teach my kids too . but the thing that stops me and scares me is that i might not succeed , it's hard to get accepted to medical school and there is a very small chance of being accepted to the university i want . and being a doctor is a lot of pressure and you have to be a strong person maybe i will not succeed in this . to overcome the difficulty i need to invest seriously, practice and learn seriously .

שואל השאלה:
בבקשה תתקנו לי את זה תודהה

i want to save peoples life **

my dream is to be a doctor , i want to save lives and learn so that i can teach my kids to do the same. but the thing that stops me and scares me is that i might not succeed , it's hard to get accepted to medical school and there is a very small chance of being accepted to the university i want . being a doctor is a lot of pressure and you have to be a strong person in order to do so. maybe i will not succeed and overcome the difficulty i need to invest seriously, practice and learn seriously .

עם פסיק למעלה כזה לפני הs

יעל^^
הדבר הכי לא הגיוני ששמעתי בזמן האחרון רציני

save lives
עם s בסוף. תיקנתי

אם לא יודעים איך לתקן אנשים פשוט אל תנסו לעזור אתם סתם מטעים באמת פשוט לא

כן את חושבת?
אני דוברת אנגלית וזה נשמע לי אחלה
אז מה שתגידי