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Recently Israel has decided to pass a law that requires companies to label food products which contains high quantities of sugar, fat and sodium in order to fight obesity, but will the law achieve it's purpose? In my opinion it will Firstly because people might be more aware of the amount of junk and unhealthy food they are consuming, and secondly because there
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