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לי נתנו לכתוב את עלילת הספר, דמות אהובה ולמה, מה הייתי משנה...
אם אתה צריך אחד מהם, תכתוב לי ואני אשלח לך:)
לי נתנו לכתוב את עלילת הספר, דמות אהובה ולמה, מה הייתי משנה...
אם אתה צריך אחד מהם, תכתוב לי ואני אשלח לך:)
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שואל השאלה:
אני צריך בדיוק מה שכתבת^
ותגובה ראשונה תודה את מדהימה תודה תודה תודה
אני צריך בדיוק מה שכתבת^
ותגובה ראשונה תודה את מדהימה תודה תודה תודה
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בשמחהה
אין בעיה, ביקשו מאיתנו לעשות את זה בהקלטה, אז אני רק אקליד את זה בקובץ ואשלח לך:)
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שואל השאלה:
ואוו, תודה רבה רבה לכולכם
ואוו, תודה רבה רבה לכולכם
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באהבה ענקית ושוב בהצלחה:)
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שואל השאלה:
מעריך את זה בטירוף, תודה!
מעריך את זה בטירוף, תודה!
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murder on the beach
author: philp drury
the plot of the story: linda is sixteen year old girl who moved to cornwall with her parents/ when she goes to the beach, she see a body of a dead woman/
in the police station, no one believes her because the body isnt found.
linda wants to find what happened and to proove she is right.
she meets a young boy named mark. they falled in love and together they started to look for the truth. their investigations lead them to a big mansion where miss landsman- julia, live and who has actress lives with her sister florence. something is very strange about the people the worked in the mansion. linda and mark suspect that florence who was murdered on the beach but they have no avidance for the police. when a movie is filmed in the mansion is able to find the needed evidence with the help of mark. the police cathches julia and her crime accomplices. mark and linda become famous for their great work.
my favorite character is also the main character, linda. i like her because she follows the truth without letting anyone stop her, not even the police who didnt believe her. she has a lot of energy and creativity to solve the mystery. she is very determined even though she is just a young girl.
the one thing i would i have change is the light punishment of julias accomplices, i think they didnt get a fair punishment and they should be punished more.
*בעיקרון עוד לא בדקו לי את זה, אז אני מקווה שזה נכון, בהצלחה:)
author: philp drury
the plot of the story: linda is sixteen year old girl who moved to cornwall with her parents/ when she goes to the beach, she see a body of a dead woman/
in the police station, no one believes her because the body isnt found.
linda wants to find what happened and to proove she is right.
she meets a young boy named mark. they falled in love and together they started to look for the truth. their investigations lead them to a big mansion where miss landsman- julia, live and who has actress lives with her sister florence. something is very strange about the people the worked in the mansion. linda and mark suspect that florence who was murdered on the beach but they have no avidance for the police. when a movie is filmed in the mansion is able to find the needed evidence with the help of mark. the police cathches julia and her crime accomplices. mark and linda become famous for their great work.
my favorite character is also the main character, linda. i like her because she follows the truth without letting anyone stop her, not even the police who didnt believe her. she has a lot of energy and creativity to solve the mystery. she is very determined even though she is just a young girl.
the one thing i would i have change is the light punishment of julias accomplices, i think they didnt get a fair punishment and they should be punished more.
*בעיקרון עוד לא בדקו לי את זה, אז אני מקווה שזה נכון, בהצלחה:)
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