איך השיר והלחן שכתבתי? - קישור מצורף

יש שם כמה טעויות אבל מה דעתכם?
עשיתי את זה עכשיו ואני גם חושב לשיר את זה.
oh i fell for you
like no one ever did
i booked us a room in a hotel

we woke up together
holding hands
getting ready for breakfast
that never came

we were trapped in dreams
the best time of my life
oh how wonderful life is
with you
with you
with you

from the minute i saw you
i fell down on my knees
felt me breath getting in

after 3 months i met your dad
and i remember he was amazed
by how i remembered all the songs you liked
and how i sang then right time after time.

we were young
we were trapped in dreams
the best time of my life
oh how wonderful life is
with you
with you
with you...