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שאלו אותי which character from the book would you like to have as a friend ?Explain and give at least two examples

עכשיו זה מה שכתבתי:
I would like to be a friend of Mr.Pickwick because he is hardworking , brave , and a caring person :In the story, Mr pickwick prevented Alfred Jingle ,a poor actor, from marrying Rachel (Wardells daughter) and stealing all her money from her, and he didnt give up until Mr Jingle received the punishment he deserved.
In addition, Mr pickwick is an honest and stubborn person: : In the story ,Mr pickwick insisted he didnt promise Mrs.bardell that he would marry her, and even sat in jail until his friends helped him get out of there