מישהו שטוב באנגלית ובניסוחים יכול לעזור לי?

אני רוצה להעלות סרטון לטובת ישראל ולעובדה שהמון אנשים תומכים בפלסטין מבלי להבין את כל התמונה. חשוב לי לא להיות תוקפנית ורק לנסות להציג צד שונה, אז ככה כתבתי-
Hey
My name is Lily, Im 17 and I live in Israel.
I dont know if youve heard but things are pretty tense here now.
A phenomenon I've been familiar with lately is that people are taking sides in the Israeli-Palestinian conflict without even really knowing both sides
All I want to ask is
Please dont believe everything you see on
the internet and social media
People post things without checking if its really true, taking things out of context and not showing/knowing both sides
Turn on your critical thinking, do reseach, learn about the history of both sides
don't be naive
I hope it doesn't change your opinions of me, this was very hard for me to do. We can have different opinions,
and I respect and accept different opinions as long as you know the whole picture.

This was very important to me cause I felt like a lot of people dont really know whats really going on.