מישהו יכול לתקן אותי אם יש לי טעויות בניסוח או בגרמר?

I choose this person because she inspires me,
She reminded me do not take things for granted,the fact that she works for her family since she was 15 years old, she lives in bad condition lives and she never complain about it.
I would ask her how can she be so strong, what keeps her alive.